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Poems
Oct 11, 2007 2:32:44 GMT -5
Post by henrymax on Oct 11, 2007 2:32:44 GMT -5
these are three poems that a friend of mine wrote. i think they are really good.
Snow Snowflakes drifting, falling on my face Drifting to the ground, falling together I picked up a ball, it was soft but cold The snow drifted around, frozen and cold, but soft on my face.
~~~~~~ Friend A Friend So much depends upon a friend, kind and caring beside you for life.
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The Special Place It is a pond, without any water, to flow under, the red metal gate. Like a sunken pool, cluttered with puddles, for the golden birds, to drink. A peaceful place, no one knows about, but the birds, butterflies, and me.
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Nov 16, 2007 3:22:07 GMT -5
Post by Paige/Chelle on Nov 16, 2007 3:22:07 GMT -5
why did you have to do that? they are bad poems.
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Nov 16, 2007 11:06:16 GMT -5
Post by lisa on Nov 16, 2007 11:06:16 GMT -5
They are not bad poems.
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Nov 21, 2007 0:38:32 GMT -5
Post by Paige/Chelle on Nov 21, 2007 0:38:32 GMT -5
no i think they are bad, but i wrote them so im allowed to hate them...
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Nov 22, 2007 18:09:44 GMT -5
Post by Billie on Nov 22, 2007 18:09:44 GMT -5
Lol they are really! Good ....I could NEVER do any thing like that!
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Nov 30, 2007 23:49:10 GMT -5
Post by Paige/Chelle on Nov 30, 2007 23:49:10 GMT -5
yea, i cant really write poetry without getting ideas from another poem, otherwise they just don't work...
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Dec 1, 2007 13:22:35 GMT -5
Post by Ivy on Dec 1, 2007 13:22:35 GMT -5
hey, they are pretty good. I am pretty good at poetry myself, but I am better with spells and stuff. Anyone wanna spell, you know where to find me.
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